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Here is my article: Best 3 Indian tourist places to visit with seniors (must be signed in to view)
A few issues:
Remove the bold text. Format the article into separate text capsules that contain proper paragraphs. At the moment it is too 'bitty'.
Remove the exclamation marks! They are unnecessary. Remove & and replace with 'and'.
Give much more information on the destinations. Your descriptions are thin and colorless. Tell your reader your own experiences of these places. Tell us about the atmosphere, the smells, the food, the people. Paint pictures with words. What did your own senior relatives like best?
Rewrite some of the instances of passive writing; "It is said that.." "It's stated that..." "It is heard that..." These are vague and irritating to readers. Who said these things? If you don't know, then write something like, "Rumour has it that...", or "I often heard from my parents...", or "There is a common myth about..."
A 'ruminant' is a cow 'Sheesh', 'Lol' and 'Tada!' are not appropriate in, what is supposed to be, a professionally written article.
Where are the legal-to-use photos of these destinations? All travel articles need photos. You can't just take them from the internet though. They have to hold the appropriate license.
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