I'd like feedback on my article: 5 Mysterious Places You Should Never Visit!!

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  1. Muhammad Fahad Akram profile image63
    Muhammad Fahad Akramposted 4 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: 5 Mysterious Places You Should Never Visit!! (must be signed in to view)

    1. theraggededge profile image97
      theraggededgeposted 4 weeks agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      You need to replace all the copied and pasted text with your own original writing. You cannot take other people's writing (even from Wikipedia) and pass it off as your own.

      Also delete the exclamation points in the title.

      It's an interesting topic and you could have a very good hub if you work on it.

      1. Muhammad Fahad Akram profile image63
        Muhammad Fahad Akramposted 4 weeks agoin reply to this

        Does removing exclamations help?

        1. theraggededge profile image97
          theraggededgeposted 4 weeks agoin reply to this

          Yes. They look unprofessional and are out of place. The only time they should be used is after an actual exclamation such as 'Hey!' They rarely have a place in non-fiction.

          However the copy and pasting is more of a serious thing. You can't do it. If the original copyright owner files a DMCA with HubPages, you could have your account closed down.

  2. Muhammad Fahad Akram profile image63
    Muhammad Fahad Akramposted 4 weeks ago

    I have only taken facts and figures. But anyway thank you a lot for your suggestions. You are always welcome.
    I have found out the problem and corrected it.
    Again thanks for your help.

  3. Rupert Taylor profile image95
    Rupert Taylorposted 4 weeks ago

    Exclamation marks are still there as well as numerous grammar errors.

    Also, I suspect the images are not Creative Commons licensed and that could get you into trouble.

  4. psycheskinner profile image84
    psycheskinnerposted 4 weeks ago

    Your research does not seem especially careful, for example, perpetuating the old and incorrect belief that Sentinelese are cannibals. That idea was written off over a decade ago.

 
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