I'd like feedback on my article: Must Visit Places in Hyderabad(love Hyderabad)

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   ZUBAIR SAQIBIposted 5 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Must Visit Places in Hyderabad(love Hyderabad) (must be signed in to view)

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   AliciaCposted 5 years ago

   Hi. You need to improve the English in this article in order for it to be accepted. You also need to remember that there must be a space after a period.
   
   You should state the source of the photos. They are interesting images, but they must have a public domain license, a commercial Creative Commons one, or be used with permission. If you took the photos yourself, you should say this somewhere in the article.
   
   Another point to note is that it's not a good idea to repeat a word in the title of an article.

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      ZUBAIR SAQIBIposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks a lot

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   Kenna McHughposted 5 years ago

   It appears you have violated several essential points in HubPages Guidelines.
   I am curious if you followed the instructions in HubPages' email and went to the Learning Center to figure out on your own why your article was not approved.
   Here is the link to the help center https://hubpages.com/help-wizard/

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   theraggededgeposted 5 years ago

   It would be really refreshing if those promoting the tourist aspects of such cities would try something different and write something a more truthful.
   
   It's easy to post some pretty pictures and talk about architecture - there is a multitude of that kind of thing all over the web. It takes a writer of courage to take an alternative approach.
   
   This is the real Hydrabad:
   
   

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      FatFreddysCatposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Oooof.... major BURN.

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      ZUBAIR SAQIBIposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Everything has pros and cons as well
      But still I appreciate
      Thanks

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   CYong74posted 5 years ago

   Zubair, you have two types of glaring, absolutely unforgivable grammar mistakes in your hub.
   
   - Improper use of caps
   - Improper punctuation. Specifically, no spaces after full stops.
   
   I apologize for being harsh, but these are basic English writing rules taught in kindergartens. Other than the great likelihood that editors here or elsewhere will stop reading after seeing these errors more than once, you give the impression you have never, ever read a properly written English article before. Otherwise, how can you not know?
   
   BTW, these errors are almost always found in unfeatured hubs by newbies from certain countries. It's tiresome, and it's baffling.

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      Eurofileposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      If English is a problem, try downloading a free version of Grammarly, which will help. Also  as others have said, go through the tutorial. We've all had to go through it when we started on Hub Pages.

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         ZUBAIR SAQIBIposted 5 years agoin reply to this

         Thanks a lot

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      ZUBAIR SAQIBIposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks a lot..

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