I'd like feedback on my article: The 15 Best Reads On Travelling You Could Ever.

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   Sush-Mitposted 5 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: The 15 Best Reads On Travelling You Could Ever Find. (must be signed in to view)

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      OldRosesposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      I'm sorry, but your English is not good enough to write on this site.  HubPages requires perfect English which is difficult even for native speakers of the language.

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         Sush-Mitposted 5 years agoin reply to this

         I'll try my best to improve my English
         Thanks for your concern.

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   AliciaCposted 5 years ago

   Hi. You’re going to have to do a lot of work to get this article featured. You need to correct the English errors, delete many of the Amazon links (especially in the cases where you have linked to Amazon twice in relation to one book), and write a lot more information about the items that are left. I didn’t want to click on your links, but it looks like you are advertising movies as well as books. The movie links should go, since your article is about books.
   
   HubPages says that articles should contain at least 300 words for each Amazon product featured. Each product should be one that we have used (or in the case of your article, read). You should read the information in the Learning Center for further guidance. The article provided by the link below contains tips for using Amazon links and capsules. https://hubpageshelp.com/money/Learning … d_22670856
   
   In addition, you need to remove the reference to “our” and the second reference to “we” in the first text capsule. You created the article, not “we”. The photos should have sources to show that they have the proper license.

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   theraggededgeposted 5 years ago

   By the way, Bill Bryson is American so he doesn't come from Britain. If you had read the book (as you claim to have read them all), then you would know that.
   
   Factual errors will undermine your authority so make sure you check every one.

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      Sush-Mitposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      sorry to bother mame. But can you give me the specific capsule where i managed to say that i read all the books?

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         DrMark1961posted 5 years agoin reply to this

         It is implied when you recommend these books, even more so when you recommend that they be purchased through Amazon. (Those links need to be made with the Amazon link available from Hubpages. If you do not do so they will never be approved.)
         There is some very awkward phrases throughout the hub:
         This read really gives a lots of commercialism in climbing Mountain Everest.
         It's a pretty safe bet to say that once you read this book your instinct to travel across Australia will never leave you alone.
         It's compiling and a reverting tale where the author retraces our main character who unravels a great mystery.
         she gradually explorers and reconnects with nature
         Read this out loud. If those sentences do not sound wrong to you then you need to have a native English speaker read this and make some edits.
         Anyone who does not know who Che Guevara is can look it up. Readers do not need those useless wikipedia links.

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         theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

         You imply it right here:
         
         "Here is my list on the top 15 books on traveling even though It has been a tough one because of the great number of authentic books out there on traveling."
         
         That seems to mean that you have read many travel books in order to produce a shortlist of 15.
         
         You cannot recommend anything on HP unless you are perfectly familiar with it. Otherwise it leads to basic errors such as the one you made about Bill Bryson.
         
         I take it that you have not read a single one

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   Rupert Taylorposted 5 years ago

   Your opening sentence is:
   
   "Guys, honesty traveling is one of those thing that you are always willing to spend on and in exchange it makes you richer in knowledge and experiences."
   
   This is so poorly phrased that I decided to go no further. I don't know what "honesty traveling" is, and a good writer would never start an article with "Guys."
   
   If this is the best you can do with written English you will not be successful here.

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      Sush-Mitposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      I'll try my best to improve my English and hope to learn from Hubpages a lot.
      Thanks for your concern.

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   psycheskinnerposted 5 years ago

   If you haven't read them, delete this hub and write a new one about something you have actually done.

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