I'd like feedback on my article: Buying Marijuana at Rise Dispensary Joliet,...

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  1. Angel Guzman profile image87
    Angel Guzmanposted 6 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Buying Marijuana at Rise Dispensary Joliet, Illinois

  2. AliciaC profile image98
    AliciaCposted 6 weeks ago

    These are some things that I noticed. Your photos are blurred. The article is too short. Something else to consider is that since the article is a news item, it may be out of date soon.

    I’m not sure that it’s appropriate to refer to a particular product in your text and second photo when marijuana is not legal everywhere in the United States. Perhaps someone who lives in the United States and is familiar with its laws will know more about this than me.

    I think you should read the answer to question 8 in the Publishing Rules and Policies part of the FAQ section of HubPages Help (if you haven’t already done so). Some of the answer applies to what you have written. I notice that ads are currently present on your article, but I still think you should read the answer to the question. https://hubpages.com/faq/#what_is_allowed

    1. Will Apse profile image92
      Will Apseposted 6 weeks agoin reply to this

      Fairly sure that pic is arty not blurry.

  3. DrMark1961 profile image97
    DrMark1961posted 6 weeks ago

    Too short.
    Break your text up into several capsules. At the top of each capsule have a subheader that explains what is in that capsule. For example, When Is It Open?, How Much Does It Cost?, Why Is It So Expensive?, etc. The cops are sitting out front looking at all of the people in line. Are they always hanging out there? Is it a problem for buyers?
    This article has the potential to be very useful and gain a lot of traffic. Best  of luck with it.

  4. justthemessenger profile image85
    justthemessengerposted 6 weeks ago

    I sent your hub to a couple of people who used to live in Joliet. One responded via my personal email.The poll question was a good move. I participated in the poll. DrMark1961 has a point. Hub pages suggest that the best way to get traffic is to publish articles between 700- 1200 words. Now, having said that I must admit my best viewed article is around 1600 words. Your article is approximately 360 words. It could be longer and stronger.

    1. DrMark1961 profile image97
      DrMark1961posted 6 weeks agoin reply to this

      On the poll, I would include "If not, please leave a comment" so that your readers can tell you why. You can use the comments when updating to help you edit it into a more useful article.

 
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