I'd like feedback on my article: Set Me Free- Lyrics With Chords by Avenged...

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  1. profile image59
    Pironjeebposted 3 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Set Me Free- Lyrics With Chords by Avenged Sevenfold (must be signed in to view)

    1. AliciaC profile image97
      AliciaCposted 3 weeks agoin reply to this

      Hi. Here are some suggestions.

      The first sentence is grammatically incorrect and the second would benefit from a comma in the appropriate place.

      The article is too short. It should be at least 700 words long and preferably 1000 words. This is especially important because at the moment a large proportion of your article is duplicate content. The lyrics that you've shared are present on many other websites.

      You say that the song hasn't been released until now and that it will be in February. I'm not sure whether you mean that February will be the first release of the song. I assume that you've checked that publishing the lyrics at this time is okay.

      You need to show that the photos in the article are legal to use by sharing their source and license.

      It would also be a good idea to correct the English errors in your bio.

    2. OldRoses profile image94
      OldRosesposted 3 weeks agoin reply to this

      Is this your piece of music?  If not, do you have permission from the author to publish it?  You must indicate this or be accused of plagiarism and possibly sued.  Please review the articles in the Learning Center (Help button, upper right).  They will tell you everything you need to know to write for Hubpages.

  2. FatFreddysCat profile image96
    FatFreddysCatposted 3 weeks ago

    I'm pretty sure that the members of Avenged Sevenfold and/or their management would not appreciate you reproducing their song lyrics without their permission.

 
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