I'd like feedback on my article: Greek Mythology Books and What Happened to...

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  1. Annie Poe profile image79
    Annie Poeposted 13 days ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Greek Mythology Books and What Happened to Them? (must be signed in to view)

    1. AliciaC profile image97
      AliciaCposted 13 days agoin reply to this

      Hi, Annie. Your title is misleading. Your article discusses the work of one writer, not Greek mythology books in general. The title doesn’t require a question mark.

      The subtitles should be written in APA title case and don’t require a colon.

      The article is too short. It’s needs more detail. You mentioned lots of characters, but I (and probably many other readers) have no idea who they are. You should try to write at least 1,000 words.

      Book titles should be italicized. This would be a problem in the present version of your article because the facts are compressed and there would be italicized sections very close together. HubPages doesn’t like a lot of italics in an article.

      Your photos should have a public domain or commercial Creative Commons license or they should be ones that you took. The source should be included in the relevant area.

      This may be just my problem, but I was uncomfortable with the fact that you criticized the writer and then immediately included a big photo of him.

      You should proofread the article in order to catch the grammar mistakes.

      I don't think it's necessary to link to the writer's website. It's easy for readers to find the site if they wish.

      Good luck with getting the article featured.

  2. Annie Poe profile image79
    Annie Poeposted 13 days ago

    Thanks for helping me out.  I guess it's a starters problem.  I will follow your advice Alicia.

  3. psycheskinner profile image84
    psycheskinnerposted 13 days ago

    The title should be more like 'Why the Percy Jackson Series is going downhill"

  4. Annie Poe profile image79
    Annie Poeposted 9 days ago

    I was actually thinking about it.  Still, thanks.


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