I'd like feedback on my article: Single Incision Gastric Sleeve in India for...

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  1. Charles kanga akou profile image43
    Charles kanga akouposted 3 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Single Incision Gastric Sleeve in India for Better Outcomes and Scar-Less Surgery (must be signed in to view)

  2. DrMark1961 profile image96
    DrMark1961posted 3 years ago

    If you want this approved:
    1. Change your profile picture
    2. Go to a health niche site and look at the articles there. This is not going to cut it here.
    3. Remove the image that advertises some clinic in Tiajuana. Stolen images are not acceptable.
    4.Your callout capsules are obviously taken from some other site. You did not even bother fixing them and they end in the middle of a sentence. The entire article should be your own work, not someone elses.
    5.Your bullet points need to be in a separate capsule with a subtitle. As it is they are just thrown out there under "summary".
    6. I did not run your article through copyscape, but some sentences are copied from other articles. (In the text, not just the callout capsules.)

  3. theraggededge profile image95
    theraggededgeposted 3 years ago

    Copied from here:

    https://ezinearticles.com/?Single-Incis … d=10239695

    I have reported you as this is the second plagiarized article you have tried to publish here.

    Suspicion aroused immediately upon seeing the first text capsule titled, "Sammary"... and that he's offering 'issues to solve problems' in his bio.

    1. FatFreddysCat profile image93
      FatFreddysCatposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      ^^^ oooooh, busted.

    2. Charles kanga akou profile image43
      Charles kanga akouposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks for your advices

  4. Ekktha Raawal profile image75
    Ekktha Raawalposted 3 years ago

    Hi all,

    I joined Hubpages today and I am looking out for the sequence of activities that I need to do on this wonderful platform and then start writing my hubs or articles to start generating money. I know it takes some time to receive my monthly payouts but I will not stop. There is a lot of learning involved and I am open to learning and getting connected with a number of writers from around the world through this platform,

    If someone can guide me on these points, it would be highly appreciated:

    1. Start writing hubs
    2. Connecting with other hubbers
    3. Socializing and making my profile viral over the Internet with the use of HP and other social media platforms.
    4. Start generating money.

    Waiting for your positive responses.

    Thank you.

    1. theraggededge profile image95
      theraggededgeposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Hi there, welcome,

      First of all, you shouldn't hijack someone else's thread - you should start your own.

      Click Help, top right, to navigate to the Learning Center which will provide you with all the information you need to get started.

      Good luck.


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