I'd like feedback on my article: New Endoscopic Procedures Like Gastric Balloon.

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   Charles kanga akouposted 5 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: New Endoscopic Procedures Like Gastric Balloon in India Offers Alternative to Bariatric Surgery (must be signed in to view)

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      theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Hi there,
      
      Unless you have the relevant medical qualifications, this is probably a topic you shouldn't be offering advice about.
      
      Not only that, it looks like you have copied most of your article from here:
      
      https://medium.com/@shekhar.anna7/new-e … a81001bfdd
      
      This is plagiarism (theft) and is not permitted here (or anywhere). I suggest you delete it.

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         Charles kanga akouposted 5 years agoin reply to this

         I never visit this site

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   Charles kanga akouposted 5 years ago

   The science is Universal

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      psycheskinnerposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      The words are plagiarized
      
      "The gastric balloon is an innovative and non-surgical option for patients looking for quality treatment for obesity. With the use of advanced endoscopic techniques, the top bariatric surgeons are putting in their best efforts to provide optimal outcomes to obesity patients around the world. Being a safe and reversible technique that requires no incisions, gastric balloon is becoming widely popular."
      
      "The gastric balloon is an innovative and non-surgical option for patients looking for quality treatment for obesity. With the use of advanced endoscopic techniques, the top bariatric surgeons in India are putting in their best efforts to provide optimal outcomes to obesity patients around the world. Being a safe and reversible technique that requires no incisions, the gastric balloon is becoming widely popular."

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         FatFreddysCatposted 5 years agoin reply to this

         But...but he added "in India" to the second sentence. That *totally* makes it his own original work.

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            theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

            I can't wait for the response
            
            You are really bad.

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   Charles kanga akouposted 5 years ago

   I visited thé site mentioned, but thé authoritative is not the true author . I found the article from médical experts issues and i found that it's intéresting to share it others persons. My role is to help others solve their problem

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      theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      It doesn't matter. You can NOT steal articles from other sites and pretend that they are yours.
      
      HubPages is a site for writers, not for sharing other people's work.
      
      It must be your own original writing.

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         Charles kanga akouposted 5 years agoin reply to this

         I'm marketer. The articles i share , it's for information. It's not to sell them. Go to medicoexperts.com to see more

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            AliciaCposted 5 years agoin reply to this

            You’re just making the situation worse for yourself. The text in your article is copied from an article published by the site that you’ve mentioned. It doesn't matter if you wrote the original article. HubPages is a site for articles that have not been previously published elsewhere. It’s not a site for marketers.
            
            If you didn't write the original article but simply copied someone else's work and gave your name as the writer, the situation is even more serious. That is plagiarism, as others have said.

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            FatFreddysCatposted 5 years agoin reply to this

            

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      FatFreddysCatposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      That's a funny way to say, "I added two words to someone else's work and tried to pass it off as my own writing."

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