I'd like feedback on my article: Online Education: The New Normal

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   Kavya Jainposted 3 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Online Education: The New Normal (must be signed in to view)

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      thewiseman2020posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Hi,
      
      seems you got already published your article, its very good article on the subject, and couldn't add more except a minor observation below
      Your info-graph on online education growth is blurry, try to reproduce with good quality image and better colors
      
      Regards,
      RT

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         Kavya Jainposted 3 years agoin reply to this

         Thank you. I will make changes accordingly.

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   CYong74posted 3 years ago

   - Don't use all caps in your headers and subheaders. Use the APA style too
   
   - Do you have permission to use those images? You can't just lift from any site. That's illegal and akin to stealing.
   
   - Too many unnecessary underlining and bolding of words.
   
   - Check your paragraphing. Some segments are improperly done
   
   - You lifted some paragraphs wholesale from other websites. Such as from CNN. DO NOT do that. It is considered plagiarism and an immediate reason for failing QAP. Write in your own words.
   
   I strongly encourage you to visit the Help Center at https://hubpages.com/help-wizard/ to know what HP looks for.
   
   Check out other featured articles for samples of what HP wants too.

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   bhattucposted 3 years ago

   It is a good article. I do not see any flaw. It is much informative and well structured. Keep up the good work and contribute more.

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   Carb Divaposted 3 years ago

   It is well written and well organized but I do detect 3 potential problems. (1) Do  not use all CAPS in your headings (Hubs Pages does not like that style). (2) The topic, though current, might not stand the test of time. HP prefers articles that are "Evergreen" (timeless). The focus is very localized and may seem irrelevant to those outside of your country. However, please keep writing. You are gifted with a strong sense of organization and you express yourself very well in writing. I look forward to seeing more from you.

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