Feedback on my article. Stress Management and importance

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    Aladdin99posted 5 years ago

    Hello everyone,

    I am new here and would love to have a feedback on my first article Stress management and importance.

    Thankyou

    https://hubpages.com/health/Stress-Mana … Importance

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    1. Miebakagh57 profile image85
      Miebakagh57posted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Alladin99, except for the topic title, all the sub topics are not in the APA style. An article must have a conclusion and a reference as source of work consult. These were lacking.         What do you mean by "obnoxous boss"? Too many complex sentences and unclear terms or phrase accured.

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    2. theraggededge profile image83
      theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Hi there, welcome.

      The first thing you need to do is to spend some time at the Learning Center: click Help, top right, to navigate there.
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      Secondly, your title would be better written as The Importance of Stress Management'. However, I'd take a bet that it has already been used. Which kind of gives you a clue to the main problem - this topic has already been written about a zillion times.

      Your article has to compete for your key phrase 'stress management' with all those other ones. To attract any significant traffic (and thus impressions and earnings) you have to get it on Google's first page of results. Therefore, you have to make it better than all those other webpages.

      You'd need to add a lot more content, and that content should be original ideas, backed up with research and references.

      Other than that, it's fine as a practice article. Put your subtitles into title case. Make sure the info-graphic is legal to use and credited to wherever you got it from.

      Good luck.

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      1. Miebakagh57 profile image85
        Miebakagh57posted 5 years agoin reply to this

        Alladin99, I wholly agreed with the theragedeggede. Compiled and thanks.

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    Aladdin99posted 5 years ago

    Thankyou for your valuable feedbacks. I will try to do it better with my next article. I agree with you completely. Thankyou again.

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