I'd like feedback on my article: Covid 19 Impacts on Airlines

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  1. Muhammad Abdul Mutaal profile image62
    Muhammad Abdul Mutaalposted 5 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Covid 19 Impacts on Airlines (must be signed in to view)

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    1. Miebakagh57 profile image86
      Miebakagh57posted 5 years agoin reply to this

      I agreed with psycheski and Alicia. In addition, the topic is not relate to the talk.

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  2. psycheskinner profile image65
    psycheskinnerposted 5 years ago

    You open with three charts that don't seem to be public domain, that's going to confuse people.  Start with a statement of what the hub will be about and a picture that generally illustrates that idea not one full of data.

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  3. AliciaC profile image92
    AliciaCposted 5 years ago

    Muhammad, I'm sorry to say that there are multiple problems in your article that you need to correct. The charts are hard to read without magnification, and you don't say what they represent. A reader has to click on the link to find the company that matches the chart.

    The article contains English errors that you need to correct. You should think about reorganizing it and adding more information. One problem is that you only analyze one company with respect to the COVID-19 situation in the "Analysis" section.

    Another problem is the Amazon capsules and ads. Why are you trying to sell items that have nothing to do with the article and that you don't review? In addition, why do you have a link to an article writing site at the end of your article? This seems like spam.

    You also have a big blank space in your article.

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  4. theraggededge profile image82
    theraggededgeposted 5 years ago

    I just wrote some feedback, and as I scrolled down through the article, it got so bad I had to abandon it.

    Edit: actually I think he got someone else to write it big_smile


    https://hubstatic.com/15099561_f1024.jpg

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