I would like feedback on my article: 5 Reasons to Stan SB19

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   Arensshiposted 4 years ago

   Hello! Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here's my article:https://hubpages.com/entertainment/5-Reasons-to-Stan-SB19

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   DrMark1961posted 4 years ago

   This is already featured but if you want to move it to Spinditty you need to make some changes. The first would be to make all of your subtitles in APA style. All of those member photos are not necessary but will slow your article down (loading time) so that it will never have a good search engine ranking. The videos are fine as they do not slow down your article.
   You should also put that spotify link down at the bottom next to your social media links. It is not a good idea to send readers off in the middle of your article as they may never come back.
   You will probably get some criticism of the grammar but it is fine since it is "fanboy" style. You could add some more details but do not need to change it.

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      Arensshiposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you! I will try to make the changes! Im thankful for your suggestions! Im happy that it is featured but it really has a low score so I want to improve it. I want to improve more as a writer so I wanted feedback. Also, yes! I would like to move it to Spinditty too. Im not confident with my grammar but I will try harder next time.

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         DrMark1961posted 4 years agoin reply to this

         Dont worry about the score much but do worry about getting it moved to Spinditty.

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            Arensshiposted 4 years agoin reply to this

            noted. Thanks!

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   Arensshiposted 4 years ago

   Thank you so much!

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   Arensshiposted 4 years ago

   I will try to make the changes! Im thankful for your suggestions! Im happy that it is featured but it really has a low score so I want to improve it, and yes! I would like to move it to Spinditty too. Im not confident with my grammar too.

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   theraggededgeposted 4 years ago

   Have you permission to republish all those photos? They are taken from a page with a clear copyright notice at the bottom.

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      Arensshiposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      sadly, no. I was hoping that it was not copyrighted. I dont know how to look for the licenses of the photos. I will try to change them.

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         theraggededgeposted 4 years agoin reply to this

         Contact the owner of the website. Those photos may be syndicated so you might have to pay for them.
         
         All images on HubPages must be legal to use.
         
         More information here: https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … -image-use

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            Arensshiposted 4 years agoin reply to this

            Thank you so much for the help!

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