I'd like feedback on my article: Why Buy Hybrid

  1. Zubin Panday profile image61
    Zubin Pandayposted 4 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Why Buy Hybrid (must be signed in to view)

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    1. theraggededge profile image82
      theraggededgeposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      The main problem is that you have used the word 'hybrid' 67 times. You should reduce that substantially.

      The second problem is that there are huge numbers of similar articles already on the web. That means you have to make yours better and more comprehensive than those on Google's first page of results.

      You have random capitalisation throughout. Hybrid doesn't need to be capitalised in the middle of a sentence unless it forms part of a vehicle name. Neither does 'charging station'.

      There are also references to other websites. You should put your authoritative references at the end of the article with a live link, correctly formatted with anchor text. Don't link to commercial sites.

      Last I heard, electricity isn't free. Certainly not in the UK. A full charge works out at around £9/$13.

      You cannot lift images from other websites unless you have express permission. Images on HubPages need to have a Creative Commons license that allows you to use them on a commercial site. Try Pixabay, Pexels, etc. You can also use images in the Public Domain from sites like Wikimedia, but you must check whether they are legal to use.

      Finally, as you are recommending that people buy a hybrid, you should share your experience of driving one. How has it worked out for you? What vehicle do you drive and what are the costs. Readers like real-life examples.

      Good luck.

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  2. Sherry Hewins profile image69
    Sherry Hewinsposted 4 years ago

    In addition to what theraggededge said, there is one more thing I would recommend. Change the title to "Why Buy a Hybrid Car."

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