Hi Hubbers,
I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
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You need to work on English and also grammar usage. It is difficult to make meaning of what you are saying, especially at the beginning. Even further in though, the grammar is poor. Also, the formatting at the top of the article--the blue, what is that, a subtitle? --it does not work.
Even if you rewrote the piece in proper English, the point you are trying to make needs more support. I got a kick out of what you said about Solomon; you made it sound great that he got all the stuff he set out to have and achieve... then came a lame statement he offered in hindsight. What did it convey? --that some people are never happy, including Solomon. It didn't make me want to run to Jesus .
I'd love to live Solomon's life, regardless of what he thought in retrospect.
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