My article was rejected; Help me improve this article.
Hi there,
Your article summary/bio is not grammatically correct. It's the first thing the editors see, so if it isn't right, they won't consider the article in a positive light.
"Throbbing toothache is one pain I have experience. This article provides homemade organic remedies that fights infection and bacteria"
I've experienced throbbing toothache. This article suggests some homemade organic remedies that fight infection and bacteria.
I would add 'in the past' after 'toothache'.
Credit your photos properly. Add the photographer/owner's name and link to the actual photo url.
Sub-headings should be in title case.
"What Is Toothache?" should be immediately answered in the following text. Your first sentence in that capsule is in the wrong place. You define it, but then you add in extra information that should not be in that section. Go read it and you will see what I mean. Every sentence in a section should relate to the sub-heading.
Why have you mentioned three UK supermarkets and one US store? Not necessary.
Your blackberry does not sound like my blackberry (bramble). They don't grow on trees but on shrubs with thorny stems. There's no bark and you wouldn't want to chew any part of the stem
And people in the northern hemisphere are unlikely to find guava in their back yard. And rarely in Tesco.
Your blackberry photo is in the wrong place.
There are inconsistencies and minor grammatical errors. To get this on a network site will take a little work, but I'm sure you can fix it.
Good luck.
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