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   Urwa786posted 4 years ago

   
   Hi Beautiful people,
   
   I wrote this article after visiting the HubPages site Delishably and following the instructions of  Bev G, Linda, Eric, and other intelligent Hubbers.
   Check it out to see if this article is right now or if there are still shortcomings.
   
   https://discover.hubpages.com/food/How- … er-Dessert

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      OldRosesposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      I didn't even get past the title.  It has a glaring error in it.  "Most favorite" is not correct English.  The word favorite is sufficient by itself.  It implies that that you like that recipe more than any other so there is no need to add most to it.
      
      I always recommend to authors for whom English is a second language to find a native English speaker to review their articles.  It will help you prevent errors like the one in your title.
      
      HubPages is an American site and will only publish articles written in perfect English.

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   EricDockettposted 4 years ago

   On another thread you mentioned you were having trouble with traffic to your articles. The problem is they are loaded with grammar and style issues. This one is no different.
   
   While your meaning is usually clear, those issues are going to keep you off the niche sites and prevent you from getting decent traffic.
   
   So, your solution to your low traffic problem is to improve your writing and get your articles moved to the niche sites. I would put more effort into that than I would creating new articles if I were you.

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   Urwa786posted 4 years ago

   Thanks Eric for your kindness and helping me. I have improved my writing a lot and I will try my best.

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      theraggededgeposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      I think that anyone who writes in a second language is very brave. I know I couldn't do it. And, when you think about it, the majority of native adult English speakers could not write a decent 1,000 word article and have it rank highly on Google. There's a lot to learn and you are hampered if you have to deal with problematic grammar and vocabulary.
      
      Read. Read. Read. Learn how to write titles. Make sure you know when to use an adjective and when to leave it out. But also realise you already write better than many English speakers

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         EricDockettposted 4 years agoin reply to this

         That's the truth.
         
         Wherever you're starting from, whether you're a native English speaker or not, it takes a lot of work a perseverence.
         
         Urwa786,  your issues are minor compared to many new writers. Keep on working at it and you'll get there.

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            Urwa786posted 4 years agoin reply to this

            Eric thank you so much for encourage me.

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         Moondot1822posted 4 years agoin reply to this

         I would agree with you, Bev g. One can't make it perfect in a few days, but it needs gradual practice. I can't forget the moment when my first article got featured on HP. This is not something to be hesitant about. I didn't get my education from top-notch institutes. But I am glad that here on HP, I can communicate with fellow authors.
         Urwa, be brave and never quit the quest for learning.

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   Urwa786posted 4 years ago

   Ok Bev G and thanks

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   Urwa786posted 4 years ago

   yeah sure Moondot, thanks

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