I really don't understand

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   Hanza Meposted 3 years ago

   I've fixed everything
   Even everyday
   But my article is still rejected.
   Maybe hubpages is not for me

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      Miebakagh57posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Some days ago, you ask for some help about passing the quality accessment(QAP). My question is this: did you implement the suggestions from me and the other experienced writers?                                               Or were you still expecting  HubPages to tell you the 'detail' of what's wrong with you article?                                       We're yet to see what you've 'fixed', or were you hidding the articles from us?                                   There's a link that Hubpages gives you in an email, that says you failed to carry through the QAP. Send us the link to access the status of your article(s).

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      Nyamweyaposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Hanza, do not give up, just write more articles. Writing is not for the faint hearted.

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         Miebakagh57posted 3 years agoin reply to this

         Nyamweya, that I agree to completely.                                      Yes, writing is not for the faint heart or timid.                                              To give up means to welcome and accept defeat. I for one would not encousaged that.                     Fortunately, it would have been much better if Hanza Me, should spend time for writing new stories to re-visit the first 5 articles. Upgrading them to pass  QAP. And thence, pass  BOOT CAMP. This is the first hurdle for every new writer on Hubpages.                                     And of course, if she get any 3 out of 5 pass QAP, a further two as new written ups which also pass QAP, qualified her for Boot Camp.

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   Marlito Tapiadorposted 3 years ago

   @Hanza... Patience is a virtue. Just try again. Your perfect time will come.

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   Rupert Taylorposted 3 years ago

   I can only see your article about sharing household tasks, but I have a few observations based on this.
   
   One sub-head needs to be in title face and the period/full stop removed.
   
   The content seems to me to be a bit thin, with a great deal of repetition about the need to share household tasks.
   
   Don't make paragraphs out of single sentences.
   
   Some of the phrasing is awkward, e.g. “The many tasks that women have to do, of course, make she's [her] very tired.”

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