I'd like feedback on my article: How to Make Life Easier for an Amazon Delivery.

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   BishamonSrposted 3 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: How to Make Life Easier for an Amazon Delivery Driver

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      quotationsposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      I think (affiliate?) links to Amazon in this context are enough to get your article rejected. I realize the article building gives you the option of adding inline affiliate links but they are not allowed to be used this way. Confusing, I know.
      
      Read the FAQ and guidelines on how you can use amazon affiliate links. Basically you need to write a review based on your personal experience with that specific product as a sort of standalone capsule. Can't do it the way you are doing it, and this is enough to get rejected.

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   theraggededgeposted 3 years ago

   I think you could work in an Amazon link easily, but you have to be able to recommend a specific product. And say why that one is better than others.
   
   Also, are you adding links using the Hubtool or are you just copying the url from the Amazon site? Because, if it's the second, you won't earn anything.
   
   Generally speaking, shorter paragraphs read better.
   
   Read your text aloud. For instance, "an electric fence can prevent such a horrible act." would sound much better as "an electric fence can prevent a nasty dog bite and a potential insurance claim."
   
   Your article bio should mention you are a delivery driver, not a writer. Or at least "I'm a writer by night and an Amazon delivery driver by day"... something like that.

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   BishamonSrposted 3 years ago

   Please no insults. Thank you. If you're going to critique, please do so nicely. Have a great day.

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      quotationsposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Are upset about what I or the theraggededge wrote or something else?

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   BishamonSrposted 3 years ago

   If you don't know an insult than there is nothing to talk about. I'm fine. Thanks for the advice.

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      theraggededgeposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      What? I can't see an insult--only two attempts to give you what you asked for.
      
      Is it the bio remark? Your article bio should relate to the content of the article. That's HP guidance, not mine. It's why they give you 25 opportunities to add different bios.
      
      Edit: here you go:
      
      A Compelling Author Bio: The Author Bio is the first thing that readers see when they land on your page. Build trust right away by concisely describing your personal experience, expertise, or passion for the subject matter you are writing about.
      
      https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … tellar-Hub

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   Rupert Taylorposted 3 years ago

   Oh dear. No good deed goes unpunished.

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   BishamonSrposted 3 years ago

   You're right. Thank you for your input. Let's just stop focusing on this issue. If no one sees it then it doesn't exist. Good day, folks! Writing is life!

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   BishamonSrposted 3 years ago

   Oh! Ok. Thanks @theraggedge. But, just because I do Amazon delivery doesn't mean I'm just a writer by night. Writers write about different topics, and titles regarding my workday is my preference. And I may not be an A+ writer, but I still identify as a full time writer. I may not make a lot of money from my content and have a lot of readers but I still take my work seriously.

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      theraggededgeposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      For heaven's sake, *I* did not say you weren't a writer. Just that you need the  *article bio* to reflect your experience as a driver. Your reader already knows you are a writer.
      
      Edit: Read Glenn's article--he explains it well: https://toughnickel.com/self-employment … techniques

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   BishamonSrposted 3 years ago

   Thanks. Have a wonderful day!

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