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   VAVINAKUposted 3 years ago

   Dear Friends,
   My article has been unpublished by moderators on 4 occasions. Every time, I did some changes to pass the QAP. But still the same- Your article does not meet the HubPages QAP standards. I am sharing my link to the recently re-published article. Can somebody point out what has gone wrong-
   https://discover.hubpages.com/health/Ho … ysfunction
   Thank you.

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      erorantesposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      I was reading your article. It is well done with your expertise. I imagine. You are very busy with your patients. My advice to you . Your article need organization. You can read the hub pages learning center. You read the requirements of a hub. You will get an idea how to organize it. Good luck.

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      Miebakagh57posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      I like and enjoy your read. But the way you punctuate the article is the issue.                                         A grammar checking tool, grammarly, get the free version at www.grammarly.com  That can help you.                                          Also check the hubpages learning center for more help on writing good model articles.

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   VAVINAKUposted 3 years ago

   Thank you very much for taking out time to reach out to me after reading my article. Can you please suggest a way to organize that article? I would highly appreciate if you do so.
   Adios.

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      erorantesposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Do you want me to tell you the mistakes too..

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      erorantesposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      You need to check your punctuation and grammar. You can divide your information in three main ideas; which is the problem, the causes and the solution. First, you write about the problem. Second, you write about what causes the problem. Finally, you write about the solutions. I will go back and read it later to see what else you can fix.

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         erorantesposted 3 years agoin reply to this

         You have single vowels and consonants that I do not understand the meaning.

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         VAVINAKUposted 3 years agoin reply to this

         Thank you very much ma'am.  I'll try to all I can. Being a medical topic it is sometimes difficult for the moderators to assess the quality. Maybe in our field we pay less attention to grammatical errors. I still use Grammarly which really helps me a lot.
         A stringent QAP may not work for me, still I will do my best. Let's see what happens next.
         Thanks again for your valuable insights. Hope to learn a lot from experienced people like you.
         Adios.

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   AliciaCposted 3 years ago

   I think you should change the treatment section. You do provide a warning for one of the treatments, but I don't think that's good enough. You need to make the section more general instead of providing specifics. If you don't do this, someone may be tempted to avoid a medical examination, make a self-diagnosis about the cause of their problem, and go straight to the treatments that you have described.
   
   I also wonder about the first photo. The credit says that you took it. You should make it more obvious that you were the photographer or that you purchased the photograph. It would also look better as a full-width photo.

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      VAVINAKUposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you ma'am for your observations. Your points are noted. I will carry out the necessary changes.

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   erorantesposted 3 years ago

   You are welcome. Enjoy your writing.

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