Need help getting article published

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   MedicalStudentBlogposted 2 years ago

   Hello! Hope you all are doing well. I have recently started writing on Hubpages. I have written 3-4 articles. However, all of them got unpublished due to not meeting standard. I want to write about skincare. Could anyone help me on how to get my article published and featured? Any help will be appreciated. Thankyou.

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      theraggededgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Hi there, here are my suggestions.
      
      Your Hyaluronic acid article is keyword stuffed. The word 'hyaluronic' appears 49 times. Maybe try to reduce it? Don't use it in every subheading.
      
      The capitalisation in subheadings should be consistent.
      
      Also, you haven't credited your images, which are poor quality. Perhaps you could find better ones? Try Pexels, Pixabay, or Unsplash.
      
      You need to add authoritative references for the claims you make.
      
      Overall, it seems that the information appears in many other articles on the web, so you should try to make yours unique by telling your experience of using the product and how it helped you.
      
      Read the skincare articles on Bellatory, which is where you'd want yours to end up: https://bellatory.com/skin/
      
      Good luck.

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   Rupert Taylorposted 2 years ago

   Read the contents of the Learning Center - follow the link at "Help" top right. Everything you need to know is covered there.

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   PaulGoodman67posted 2 years ago

   Lots of problems with the two articles published. They're difficult to read. I gave up, which is a bad sign.
   
   I then checked out the bio, which bemused me:
   
   "Sofia likes to focuses on skincare, as too much information is out on the internet that it could be overwhelming to grasp for a person without medical or science background. She likes to keep the information simple, concise, and easily understandable."
   
   Sorry, I can't be more positive. I wouldn't know where to start to be brutally frank. Maybe you do what Rupert says above and go from there?

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   Stephen Tomkinsonposted 2 years ago

   Hello, Sofia.
   I think that the article on Hyaluronic Acid falls between two stools. If it's meant for people who are looking for effective skin-care products, it's a bit too technical. If you are aiming at professionals, it's probably not telling them anything new.
   When you choose your subject, you should think about your readership. You don't need to talk down to people but you shouldn't dazzle them with science. Imagine that you are writing for an intelligent friend who has no training in this field.
   It gets easier. Keep going!

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   AliciaCposted 2 years ago

   I don't know if the factors in your schizophrenia article apply to the ones that are not featured, but they are important to consider. First, the schizophrenia article is too short. Secondly, you never mention what the putamen is. I suspect that many people reading our articles won't have heard of it before. Another problem is the article was written almost four years ago. Updating articles could be important, especially ones that are related to health.

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