My article need improvements,point out my mistakes plz.
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This is a saturated topic meaning it is competing against thousands of other similar articles on the internet so you aren't likely to earn much. A better idea is to choose one or two details of the excavation or civilization and write an article about that. There will be fewer competing articles and you will have a chance to earn more.
Be careful not to get too slap-happy with bullet points. I recommend having a sentence or two after a title that introduces a list of bullet points. It's also a good idea in an article with multiple bullet lists to have some that are unnumbered and some that are numbered.
If you have a long list, consider creating a table.
Your title needs more energy to it. It's bland at the moment.
Cite your sources. This makes you a more trusted writer.
Your article is short. I encourage people to write to at least 1,250 words.
Images need to be free of copyright restrictions and credited as to source. The Learning Center - follow link at Help, to right - has a valuable section about images.
Sub titles need to use the APA capitalization format.
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