I'd like feedback on my article: A Story of Sisterhood

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  1. Shravya miryala profile image45
    Shravya miryalaposted 5 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: A Story of Sisterhood (must be signed in to view)

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    1. theraggededge profile image98
      theraggededgeposted 5 months agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      This is a blog post which won't work in it's current form. HubPages wants articles that offer useful information. You could restructure it by writing about difficult relationships between sisters, how to improve them, and include an account of your own.

      Remove the Amazon products... they have no relevance to your content.

      Good luck.

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      1. Shravya miryala profile image45
        Shravya miryalaposted 5 months agoin reply to this

        Thank you for your feedback, will definitely do it.

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    2. WriterJanis profile image92
      WriterJanisposted 5 months agoin reply to this

      This is a beautiful tribute to your sister, but not a HubPages article. I suggest you follow the advice already given to you by other writers here.

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      1. Shravya miryala profile image45
        Shravya miryalaposted 5 months agoin reply to this

        Thank you for your feedback

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  2. Rupert Taylor profile image96
    Rupert Taylorposted 5 months ago

    I echo what theraggededge says and add a caution about images.

    Some of your images may be your own and that's fine, others need to be free of copyright restrictions and given credit as to the source.

    You need to spend time at the Learning Center. Follow the link at "Help" top right of this screen.

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    1. Shravya miryala profile image45
      Shravya miryalaposted 5 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you for your feedback

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  3. theraggededge profile image98
    theraggededgeposted 5 months ago

    Following on from Rupert's comment, there are too many generic images. They don't add anything to your articles and may make them slower to load. You only need two, three max unless you are writing about a topic that requires a lot of images.

    And, yes you must check they have an appropriate license.

    https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … -image-use

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    1. Shravya miryala profile image45
      Shravya miryalaposted 5 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you for your feedback, I am definitely going to improve the article.

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