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   Sadaka Ahmedposted 23 months ago

   Can anyone suggest me how to write better short story for Hubpages?

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      WriterJanisposted 23 months agoin reply to this

      I see you already have had articles moved to the niche site LetterPile. Congrats! I would continue to use the format you used for these articles.

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         Sadaka Ahmedposted 23 months agoin reply to this

         Thank you, its my pleasure that you read me. But I usually interested in writing short story. Sometime I express my instant feeling trough poem and upload it.

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   Rupert Taylorposted 23 months ago

   I skimmed through your article "Avoiding physical symptoms for the sake of being busy is not a good idea," and noticed several issues.
   
   The title should be in APA Title Face and there should be no period/full stop at the end.
   
   Your article reads like a personal-experience blog and HubPages is not a blogging platform. It requires us to write magazine-style articles of 1,000 to 1,500 words that provide accurate information readers are looking for with media such as images and videos and in perfect English.
   
   That last point brings me to your skill with English; it's not quite up to the standard required for promotion to network sites. I suggest you run your copy through a free program such as Grammarly to catch most of the errors.
   
   Also, spend time at the Learning Center - follow the link at "Help", top right - there is a wealth of information there that will help you become successful at HugPages.

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      Sadaka Ahmedposted 23 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you for your valuable advice. It means a lot to me.

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   AliciaCposted 23 months ago

   I took a look at your profile. Congratulations on getting some of your creative writing switched to LetterPile!
   
   I have to comment about one of your other articles. I read your article about depression. Depression can be a very serious state of mind. People who aren’t mental health professionals have to be very cautious when writing about it.
   
   You need to correct the grammar, spelling, and spacing errors in the article. You should also include helpful references for people and ones that support what you say. If you have experience dealing with depressed people or have been depressed yourself, you should mention this in the article. This could be important for readers and for the success of your article.

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      Sadaka Ahmedposted 23 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you Alicia for your valuable advice. It really really means a lot to me as I am a new Hub writer.

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