I'd like feedback on my article: Best Sweet 16 Party Ideas Your Picky Teenager..

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  1. Nyamweya profile image57
    Nyamweyaposted 19 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Best Sweet 16 Party Ideas Your Picky Teenager Will enjoy

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    1. theraggededge profile image79
      theraggededgeposted 19 months agoin reply to this

      You won't like this but...

      The article is lacking content and is just a rewrite of 1,000 similar articles. There are also a lot of grammatical errors throughout. You haven't cited the image source or license.

      Why the bolded and italicized similar key phrases? It looks awful and is blatant spam. Those days of keyword stuffing are gone; no one likes reading it, Google penalizes it, and HubPages certainly won't approve it.

      Read some of the articles on the network site, Holidappy, to see how to create a birthday party article: https://holidappy.com/party-planning/birthdays/

      By the way, are you really an X-ray technician? You claim to be in one of your articles, yet your bio says you are a researcher.

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    2. Kenna McHugh profile image83
      Kenna McHughposted 19 months agoin reply to this

      Well, you've copied and pasted from other sources, so 59% of plagiarised content will not pass HP. I suggest writing an original article.

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    3. WriterJanis profile image80
      WriterJanisposted 19 months agoin reply to this

      As mentioned, you need to credit your images sources. Also, you have everything in one text capsule. These really need to be broken down into individual text capsules for each idea.
      You also have way too much bold print in your article. I suggest you check out the learning center to find out how to properly write an article here. Good luck!

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  2. Rupert Taylor profile image84
    Rupert Taylorposted 19 months ago

    "If you are not financially secure, you can host a sweet 16th party at home. That is, a birthday picnic. Your backyard or pool is the ideal location for them to celebrate their special day."

    It's puzzling how someone who is not financially secure can have a backyard pool. They are expensive to maintain. I know I had one and it was a real drain on resources.

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