I'd like feedback on my article: Why Accountability and Relationship is...

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   Nyamweyaposted 6 months ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Why Accountability and Relationship is Important in Every Relationship

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      WriterJanisposted 6 months agoin reply to this

      Hi! I read your article and I see a few things that can be improved. First, you need to credit your image and be sure it's one you're allowed to use for your article. I would also add a couple more pictures.
      
      You need to break your paragraphs down into different text sections with a proper title for each one. I would also check your word count as it looks low.
      
      Have you checked out the learning center? It can show you how to properly format an article. I think it would be very helpful for you.
      Good luck!

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   Gregory DeVictorposted 6 months ago

   Your title is not in proper APA format. The word "is" needs to be capitalized to comply with APA standards.
   
   Don't forget to include a caption with each of your images. In the caption, you need to tell your audience how each image relates to your article's overall theme.
   
   As you have already been told by Writer Janis, be sure to break your paragraphs into much smaller components.
   
   You also need to correct some of the pesky grammatical errors in your profile. For example, you describe yourself as an "award winning journalist." That phrase needs to be changed to "award-winning journalist," since "award-winning" is functioning as an adjective to modify journalist.
   
   Your title needs to be changed so that the word "relationship" does not appear twice. Look up synonyms for the word "relationship" online and work from there. Right now, the title looks like you are keyword stuffing, and Google as well as an HP editor might interpret it in the same way.
   
   As you have been already been told by Writer Janis, why not "check out" HP's Learning Center so that you can learn how to create a more successful article. I see that you have already written over 1,100 articles to date. That's impressive, but how many of them are on niche sites?

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