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  1. Shria Chirvi profile image51
    Shria Chirviposted 6 months ago

    https://hubpages.com/relationships/my-fruity-friendship
    I have written a poem titled as 'My Fruity Friendship '. This is really close to my heart. Pleaze provide your precious feedback.

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    1. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 5 months agoin reply to this

      As I said before, I am no expert in poetry. However, in English and definitely in the UK, 'fruity' often means humorously sexy big_smile

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    2. WriterJanis profile image93
      WriterJanisposted 5 months agoin reply to this

      You're very good with words and I enjoy reading your poetry. However, like the last time you posted a new article, you haven't credited your image. Even if you take the picture yourself, you still need to credit it.

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  2. Shria Chirvi profile image51
    Shria Chirviposted 5 months ago

    Here, fruity is used as metaphor which means a sweet and sour bond.

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    1. OldRoses profile image95
      OldRosesposted 5 months agoin reply to this

      But you are writing for an English speaking audience where words and phrases mean different things.  You have to be careful about that.  In this case, you should choose another word to substitute for fruity.

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      1. Shria Chirvi profile image51
        Shria Chirviposted 5 months agoin reply to this

        Yeah, you are right,now I changed the title for my poem.

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  3. Brenda Arledge profile image80
    Brenda Arledgeposted 5 months ago

    Your poem is really good.

    Yes, I'm glad you changed title~ it didn't do it justice.
    This is a true friendship that has grown from within...all those pitfalls and highs along life's journey.

    Your friend will like it.

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  4. Shria Chirvi profile image51
    Shria Chirviposted 5 months ago

    He doesn't talk to me now . He says I am his distraction.

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