I'd like feedback on my article: What to Do With a Dead MacBook

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   pages152posted 15 months ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: What to Do With a Dead MacBook (must be signed in to view)

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      Jan Stepanposted 15 months agoin reply to this

      The biggest issue is the unmatching URL, as was already stated by Bev.
      
      Besides that, your article needs a bit of a rework. Firstly, I would rearrange the content to appear more reader-friendly. Learn the HubPages editor and make sure to use its functions. Right now, it seems like you've rushed through it all.
      
      Secondly, go through your text and make sure the grammar is correct. Some sentences, especially at the end of your article, need an "upgrade" to get featured.
      
      Best of luck!

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      OldRosesposted 15 months agoin reply to this

      Your profile says that you are a blogger.  HubPages is not a blogging platform.  It is a platform for magazine style articles.  If you wish to write a blog, try Blogger or WordPress, both can be monetized.

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      Kenna McHughposted 15 months agoin reply to this

      Your article is 716 words, you need to expand your ideas and get up to at least over 850. Also, the formatting is not professional. You have bullets numbering doubled.
      
      Frankly, it looks like you didn't even edit the piece after not passing QA. Getting published on HP takes hard work. As others suggest, go to the Learning Center and learn how to write for HP.

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   theraggededgeposted 15 months ago

   The content does not have anything to do with the url. Looks like you started an article about 'what to do with a dead macbook' then changed your mind. You need to start over with a new url. And remove the spammy link at the end.

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   pages152posted 15 months ago

   so how i can publish with my desired website link?

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      theraggededgeposted 15 months agoin reply to this

      Start a new article. Click 'Write', top right.
      
      But before you do that spend some time in the Learning Center (Help, top right). The information there will help you format and write a decent article. Images must be correctly attributed and licensed. You need to know this stuff before you can write here.
      
      As your bio says "I am a professional blogger share guide about the Technology, Internet, WordPress, Blogging tutorial, SEO techniques..." then you will know that understanding how a platform works is essential.
      
      I would also suggest you remove your email address from your bio and use a grammar checker to improve it.

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