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  1. Gloriousconfusion profile image82
    Gloriousconfusionposted 17 months ago

    https://discover.hubpages.com/literatur … nd-sayings

    I have been advised by the editors as follows, but am not sure exactly how they want me to change it:
    "•    Layout:
    Text should be broken up into multiple capsules with clear headers. Think about ways you can condense the information in the article so that it is more readable and scannable (especially on mobile). Bulleted and numbered lists and Table Capsules are great ways to summarize information in a more digestible format.
    •    Text Formatting:
    Only bold words and phrases when necessary. Italics should be used for the titles of books, video games, movies, and television shows, but not to provide emphasis. Additionally, avoid large blocks of text that are excessively stylized (i.e., bolded, italicized, underlined, or in all caps), as they impede readability. Lastly, using standard font sizing (the provided title and subtitle fields, as well as Heading 2s and Heading 3s) allows your reader to follow the structure of your article more easily."

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    1. Kenna McHugh profile image84
      Kenna McHughposted 17 months agoin reply to this

      Hello!

      I see a lot of formatting issues. Let's start with Colourful English Proverbs and Sayings--How Many Of These Expressions Do You Remember? Instead of two endashes, I'd use a colon or emdash.

      Also, your song titles need to be italicized or put in quotes, depending on where you place the title. In the text capsule, you can use italics.

      Your text format changes at Sayings And Metaphors - Pink And Purple.

      I wrote an article that's on Owl. You might want to consider this format:
      https://owlcation.com/humanities/10-Idi … bout-Anger

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  2. Marketing Merit profile image63
    Marketing Meritposted 17 months ago

    The formatting layout for the colours pink and purple, and black is different from the other colours Diana. This maybe the formatting issue that they are referring to.

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