I'd like feedback on my article: Ramadan and its Importance

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   AbdulWasay107posted 5 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Ramadan and its Importance (must be signed in to view)

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   AbdulWasay107posted 5 years ago

   Please tell, what is the problem with the article.
   Everything seems right in it

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   AliciaCposted 5 years ago

   Hi. Here are some problems that I noticed.
   
   Your need to correct the English errors in the article.
   
   There’s an excessive amount of bold formatting, italics, and underlined text in the article. If you used multiple text capsules, you could use the subtitle of each capsule to emphasize your headings. You could also use callout capsules for some of your quotes. The Learning Center article in the link below explains how to use the different capsules that are available.
   
   https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … ng-hubtool
   
   You should state the source and license of the photo to show that it's suitable for you to use in your article.

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   AbdulWasay107posted 5 years ago

   I have made the necessary changes, but still not qualified, please tell what can I do further.

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   Reonyposted 5 years ago

   I'm a Hindu. Islam is Arabic culture primarily. We Hindus need to learn more about your religion, and vice versa.
   
   Your article is ok.

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   AliciaCposted 5 years ago

   Hi again. I think your article has improved since I last saw it, but it still has some problems. I think one problem preventing the article from being featured is the English errors that it contains. In addition, the article still contains a lot of italicized sections and you still haven’t stated the source and license of the photo. It would be good to give the photo a caption to show what it represents for people who aren’t familiar with the image.
   
   You certainly don't have to use my words, but one way to improve the first paragraph could be as follows.
   
   Ramadan Kareem is the holiest month of the year for Muslims. They believe that during Ramadan the doors of heaven are opened, the doors of hell are closed, and the devil is chained. These conditions enable Muslims to concentrate on their prayers.
   
   It would be best if you could work with someone you know who has an excellent knowledge of English. They could help you improve the article and you could make sure that the meaning doesn’t change as the article is edited.
   
   I think you meant to write “Conclusion” for the subtitle of the last text capsule.

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   AbdulWasay107posted 5 years ago

   Thank you for your feedback,
   you are a real help for beginners like me.

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