I'd like feedback on my article: A Thrilling First-Hand Experience To Parashar..

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  1. Connect Rajinder profile image82
    Connect Rajinderposted 3 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: A Thrilling First-Hand Experience To Parashar Lake Trek

    1. Eurofile profile image98
      Eurofileposted 3 months agoin reply to this

      You have packed a lot of interesting information into this article. It probably just needs a little tightening up in places to get through the process.
      I have noticed that some of the titles of capsules are quite long. Could you shorten them a little? The same goes for your main title. Could you make it more direct?
      There are some parts of your article where photo capsules are lined up. From experience, editors seem to favour text capsules interspersed with other capsules to add variety. Too many text capsules one after the other tend to make readers switch off. Likewise too many photo capsules lumped together distract from the writing. You could use the thumbnail option to load several photos onto one capsule.
      Rather than a long description under a photo, why not write about the photo in a text capsule?
      If you download a free version of grammarly it will help with any spelling errors and simple grammar problems.
      I sympathise with you.  You are a talented writer with a lot to share. All I can say is, if you persevere you will get through boot camp. I hope this helps.

  2. Connect Rajinder profile image82
    Connect Rajinderposted 3 months ago

    Hi Eurolife, that was great help. You are such an awesome person I have ever seen online. You have given me a lot of quality insight. I will implement these feedback points in my hub.

  3. Kenna McHugh profile image89
    Kenna McHughposted 3 months ago

    I agree with Eurofile.  I recommend taking a look at some articles similar to yours in WanderWisdom. Notice how they keep the paragraphs short and to the point.  Good luck!

  4. Connect Rajinder profile image82
    Connect Rajinderposted 3 months ago

    Thank you so much Kenna for that really nice tip. It will help me restructure my hub and make it more reader friendly.


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