I'd like feedback on my article: 8 Kinds of Houses to Die For

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  1. esja profile image76
    esjaposted 17 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: 8 Kinds of Houses to Die For

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    1. Kenna McHugh profile image83
      Kenna McHughposted 17 months agoin reply to this

      Hello! The formatting doesn't follow HP standards. I suggest clicking on the "Help" button to the right of this page, clicking on "Learning Center," and studying how to write for HP.

      In the meantime, a few notes:

      The photos need a source because of copyright issues.
      You need an introduction.
      Use APA style titles.

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    2. WriterJanis profile image80
      WriterJanisposted 17 months agoin reply to this

      As already mentioned, you need an opening to your article to introduce what your article is about. You have some great pictures here, but they need to be properly credited and make sure you are allowed to use them in your article. Your formatting needs a lot of work and I agree with checking out the Learning Center for help. I see this article is from 2015. Any reason you have now decided to get help for it?

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      1. esja profile image76
        esjaposted 17 months agoin reply to this

        Thanks for the input Janis.

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  2. Rupert Taylor profile image82
    Rupert Taylorposted 17 months ago

    Apologies for not reading the entire article - time pressures - but I noticed a couple of issues.

    "Your home is your where your heart is," The correct phrase with appropriate AP Title Face for a sub-title is "Your Home Is Where Your Heart Is."

    "I should be the place where you live the way you want to, where you can ..." Should be "It" not "I".

    A thorough proofreading is needed.

    Images need to be credited and to be free of copyright restrictions.

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    1. esja profile image76
      esjaposted 17 months agoin reply to this

      Appreciate this Rupert.

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  3. PaulGoodman67 profile image67
    PaulGoodman67posted 17 months ago

    The extremely brief About section: "Love travelling, reading, camping" combined with a rather vague profile pic doesn't do you any favors.

    More could be done to project expertise and experience. This is vital, the way things have been going with Google.

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    1. esja profile image76
      esjaposted 17 months agoin reply to this

      Good advice, thanks Paul.

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