I'd like feedback on my article: Story of Cinderella

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  1. Tolovaj profile image90
    Tolovajposted 4 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I am not a new Hubber, but I would like some feedback anyway. My article about Cinderella didn't pass the quality check even after I rewrote it and used spell checkers and other tools to meet quality standards. The only thing I can see at the moment it's its length - it's a bit longer than other articles. I can cut the part about the reasons for popularity. It's that all? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Story of Cinderella

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    1. greenmind profile image93
      greenmindposted 4 months agoin reply to this

      Most likely it's the Audiobook link. Strip out all links, including to Owlcation, and submit it again. You can generally add in links once it passes QAP.

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    2. Kenna McHugh profile image92
      Kenna McHughposted 4 months agoin reply to this

      It's published on Discover.

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    3. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 4 months agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      Longer length is not an issue. However, there are minor grammatical errors throughout. For example, the title should be 'The Story of Cinderella'.

      The subheadings should be properly capitalised. Use capitalizemytitle.com.

      Your conclusion should be a brief round up of the content. The current conclusion is a bit weird, to be honest. Remember that your readers are likely to be westerners who are accustomed to women being on equal terms with men. Your assertion that Americans favour 'passive women' is somewhat insulting to most of us. While a lot of post-war women took on the homemaker role (after working mens' jobs while the men fought), they certainly weren't passive, at least in my family.

      Use the free app, Hemingway to clean up the style.

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