HI Eileen,
To start with, although I was able to find your article, it would be helpful if you posted a link to it.
The first thing I noticed is that you don't have any pictures in your article. You should have at least two properly credited images.
You should also break your article down into more texts with better text titles. In addition, for todays standards, your paragraphs are too long. These days most people read articles on their phones so they need to be shorter.
If you're going to list something such as materials you will need, then make it a bulleted list.
Compared to when you first started here, placing an Amazon ad has changed. An ad will only be accepted if you have personally used the product and are basically including a product review with the ad.
If you have any references for the information in your article, include them at the end of your article.
I see you have been with HubPages for a very long time. It's very different now than when you started. I suggest you check out the learning center to get up to date info and what you need to do these days.
Good luck and I hope this helps.
Thank you so much for that yes it has changed a lot. Very helpful thanks for that
Eileen, it's not very well formatted. The text capsules have formatting aids such as bullets and numbering.
Use several capsules with properly licensed images in between to illustrate your points.
Remove the odd heading at the bottom of the page.
If you take Janis's advice and visit the Learning Center (click Help, top right, to navigate there), you will see how articles should be laid out, as they are all properly formatted.
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