Improving my article

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   Janenderituposted 14 months ago

   Hello hubbers looking for some criticism on my new article. Any feedback will be appreciated
   http://hub.me/aqy0v

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      theraggededgeposted 14 months agoin reply to this

      Hi there,
      
      Two important considerations:
      
      Images must be republished under an appropriate license, either Creative Commons for commercial use or certified Public Domain. The source should be cited with a link back to the original.
      
      https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … -image-use
      
      Subtitles should be in APA format, i.e. correctly capitalized.
      
      https://capitalizemytitle.com
      
      There are several grammatical issues, such as it should be Dwayne "The Rock" Johnson, not Dwayne the Rock Johnson.
      
      Quotes should be in a call-out capsule to make them stand out.
      
      Make use of the Learning Center to help you with creating articles.
      
      Hope that helps

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         Janenderituposted 14 months agoin reply to this

         Thank you

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      Miebakagh57posted 14 months agoin reply to this

      Hi Jane, I visited the link, but meet a '404 error', that the page doesn't exists.                                      Perhaps, you deleted it due to the theragedge positive imput? And to make some changes?

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         Janenderituposted 14 months agoin reply to this

         I just made some changes you can check it out and tell me what you think.

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            Miebakagh57posted 14 months agoin reply to this

            Moments awhile, I came back here from visiting your link.                                                    Still meet a dead end and error message, that the page doesn't exist.                                               You done with the editing? Then hit the  'Publish Now' button. And We'll see your article. Much thanks.

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               Janenderituposted 14 months agoin reply to this

               No it's published

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                  theraggededgeposted 14 months agoin reply to this

                  You still haven't attributed your images as advised by that HubPages guide I linked to. You need to add in the caption box "Photo used under license CC.02.03". Or whatever the license is. And then put the link to the original in the url box.
                  
                  It's really important you don't republish photos illegally. At best, you could receive a demand for payment, at worst it could be legal action. Photos usually belong to someone and just because they are on the internet doesn't mean you can lift them. Read the guidance.
                  
                  HubPages is a commercial site that advertises and pays contributors. Therefore, you have to make sure the license status of any images used meets the criteria to be republished.

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                     Janenderituposted 14 months agoin reply to this

                     I appreciate you took the time to go through it. Thanks for the feedback

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                  Miebakagh57posted 14 months agoin reply to this

                  But it's no longer publish. Today Sunday, I again meet a dead end.                                 Jane, if you hit 'unpublish', and you proceed to edited your stuff,I think no one will see your hub. Just press publish button again, I'll chew and digest it.

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                     Janenderituposted 14 months agoin reply to this

                     Sorry, I was fixing some issues

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                        Miebakagh57posted 14 months agoin reply to this

                        Okay I got it.                                  It's a good piece. Go make it better, like the other writers here have said. Thanks.

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      Kenna McHughposted 14 months agoin reply to this

      Your article has typos and inconsistent punctuation. Your bio says you are a communications and media graduate. Sorry, but many qualified sources have written about this subject, which is often in question by other qualified sources. Mayo Clinic, CDC, Medical News Today and more saturate the Internet. So, you have competition.

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   Kenna McHughposted 14 months ago

   You're probably editing it be because I am getting an error message.

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      Janenderituposted 14 months agoin reply to this

      I was just making some changes but you can now check it out

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         WriterJanisposted 14 months agoin reply to this

         HI!
         I checked out your article and see that you have still not properly credited your images or using images that are allowed on HubPages.
         Also, you still need work on formatting.
         You have some really great info, but it needs to follow HiubPages guidelines. Also, do you have any sources you can cite?

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            Janenderituposted 14 months agoin reply to this

            Thanks girl for that , you just inspired me

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   Janenderituposted 14 months ago

   Thank you, worked on it

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      theraggededgeposted 14 months agoin reply to this

      What did you change?

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         Janenderituposted 14 months agoin reply to this

         Stated the sources of my pictures

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            theraggededgeposted 14 months agoin reply to this

            You have to do it for each one in the image capsules. Source, license and url.
            
            It's all laid out here: https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … -image-use
            
            If you don't do it properly your articles won't be promoted to the network sites and may not be featured.
            
            I'm trying to help you here but you don't seem to understand the importance of correct image use and attribution.
            
            You cannot take them from websites without permission.
            
            Edit: https://www.gettyimages.co.uk/faq/basic … s-for-free

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   PaulGoodman67posted 14 months ago

   Just to add to what others have said. Using images without the owner's permission isn't just morally wrong, it beaches HP rules and copyright laws.
   
   You have to take this matter seriously if you want to publish here. Just ignoring this issue isn't an option.

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