Improving my article

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  1. Janenderitu profile image45
    Janenderituposted 2 months ago

    Hello hubbers looking for some criticism on my new article. Any feedback will be appreciated
    http://hub.me/aqy0v

    1. theraggededge profile image97
      theraggededgeposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      Two important considerations:

      Images must be republished under an appropriate license, either Creative Commons for commercial use or certified Public Domain. The source should be cited with a link back to the original.

      https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … -image-use

      Subtitles should be in APA format, i.e. correctly capitalized.

      https://capitalizemytitle.com

      There are several grammatical issues, such as it should be Dwayne "The Rock" Johnson, not Dwayne the Rock Johnson.

      Quotes should be in a call-out capsule to make them stand out.

      Make use of the Learning Center to help you with creating articles.

      Hope that helps smile

      1. Janenderitu profile image45
        Janenderituposted 2 months agoin reply to this

        Thank you

    2. Miebakagh57 profile image69
      Miebakagh57posted 2 months agoin reply to this

      Hi Jane, I visited the link, but meet a '404 error', that the page doesn't exists.                                      Perhaps, you deleted it due to the theragedge positive imput? And to make some changes?

      1. Janenderitu profile image45
        Janenderituposted 2 months agoin reply to this

        I just made some changes you can check it out and tell me what you think.

        1. Miebakagh57 profile image69
          Miebakagh57posted 2 months agoin reply to this

          Moments awhile, I came back here from visiting your link.                                                    Still meet a dead end and error message, that the page doesn't exist.                                               You done with the editing? Then hit the  'Publish Now' button. And We'll see your article. Much thanks.

          1. Janenderitu profile image45
            Janenderituposted 2 months agoin reply to this

            No it's published

            1. theraggededge profile image97
              theraggededgeposted 2 months agoin reply to this

              You still haven't attributed your images as advised by that HubPages guide I linked to. You need to add in the caption box "Photo used under license CC.02.03". Or whatever the license is. And then put the link to the original in the url box.

              It's really important you don't republish photos illegally. At best, you could receive a demand for payment, at worst it could be legal action. Photos usually belong to someone and just because they are on the internet doesn't mean you can lift them. Read the guidance.

              HubPages is a commercial site that advertises and pays contributors. Therefore, you have to make sure the license status of any images used meets the criteria to be republished.

              1. Janenderitu profile image45
                Janenderituposted 2 months agoin reply to this

                I appreciate you took the time to go through it. Thanks for the feedback

            2. Miebakagh57 profile image69
              Miebakagh57posted 2 months agoin reply to this

              But it's no longer publish. Today Sunday, I again meet a dead end.                                 Jane, if you hit 'unpublish', and you proceed to edited your stuff,I think no one will see your hub. Just press publish button again, I'll chew and digest it.

              1. Janenderitu profile image45
                Janenderituposted 2 months agoin reply to this

                Sorry, I was fixing some issues

                1. Miebakagh57 profile image69
                  Miebakagh57posted 2 months agoin reply to this

                  Okay I got it.                                  It's a good piece. Go make it better, like the other writers here have said. Thanks.

    3. Kenna McHugh profile image91
      Kenna McHughposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      Your article has typos and inconsistent punctuation. Your bio says you are a communications and media graduate. Sorry, but many qualified sources have written about this subject, which is often in question by other qualified sources. Mayo Clinic, CDC, Medical News Today and more saturate the Internet. So, you have competition.

  2. Kenna McHugh profile image91
    Kenna McHughposted 2 months ago

    You're probably editing it be because I am getting an error message.

    1. Janenderitu profile image45
      Janenderituposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      I was just making some changes but you can now check it out

      1. WriterJanis profile image90
        WriterJanisposted 2 months agoin reply to this

        HI!
        I checked out your article and see that you have still not properly credited your images or using images that are allowed on HubPages.
        Also, you still need work on formatting.
        You have some really great info, but it needs to follow HiubPages guidelines. Also, do you have any sources you can cite?

        1. Janenderitu profile image45
          Janenderituposted 2 months agoin reply to this

          Thanks girl for that , you just inspired me

  3. Janenderitu profile image45
    Janenderituposted 2 months ago

    Thank you, worked on it

    1. theraggededge profile image97
      theraggededgeposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      What did you change?

      1. Janenderitu profile image45
        Janenderituposted 2 months agoin reply to this

        Stated the sources of my pictures

        1. theraggededge profile image97
          theraggededgeposted 2 months agoin reply to this

          You have to do it for each one in the image capsules. Source, license and url.

          It's all laid out here: https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … -image-use

          If you don't do it properly your articles won't be promoted to the network sites and may not be featured.

          I'm trying to help you here but you don't seem to understand the importance of correct image use and attribution.

          You cannot take them from websites without permission.

          Edit: https://www.gettyimages.co.uk/faq/basic … s-for-free

  4. PaulGoodman67 profile image96
    PaulGoodman67posted 2 months ago

    Just to add to what others have said. Using images without the owner's permission isn't just morally wrong, it beaches HP rules and copyright laws.

    You have to take this matter seriously if you want to publish here. Just ignoring this issue isn't an option.

 
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