Hub critiques

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  1. Jule Romans profile image95
    Jule Romansposted 14 years ago


    I have started  my first sales hub. I consider it a first draft. I am figuring I will change it a lot in the next few days, with your help, of course. :-)

    I am interested in any comments or feedback, especially on my use of keywords.


  2. Ohma profile image60
    Ohmaposted 14 years ago

    I like it. the only thing I might consider changing is the placement og your first picture. If you move it down to align with your second text casule it will allow for a google ad to be placed where the picture is at present. many good hubbers say that this is the optimum spot for google ads.

  3. britneydavidson profile image61
    britneydavidsonposted 14 years ago

    Hello Jule, when i look to your hub, i am getting this msg- ( Sorry, this page is no longer published.)

  4. flread45 profile image59
    flread45posted 14 years ago

    Did you unpublish your hub and forget to publish it again???sad

  5. Jule Romans profile image95
    Jule Romansposted 14 years ago

    Yes, I did. Sorry! It's back now. :-) Please try again?

  6. Ohma profile image60
    Ohmaposted 14 years ago

    See you moved your Pic as suggested the reason the ad did not show up is because your opening paragraph is not long enough for it.

  7. KeithTax profile image72
    KeithTaxposted 14 years ago

    Jule, you did an excellent job! You put some serious effort in. I like the writing and the layout. There is a good mix of Amazon capsules throughout. Very nice.

    I agree with Ohma, move the image down so Google places an ad in the upper right corner. This should help increase revenue.

    I think you have a winner. As you move up in SERPs you should realize a nice income off this one.

    1. Jule Romans profile image95
      Jule Romansposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      Well, thank you! It really helps to know that this is a good way to start. Now I can write more hubs!


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