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The Great Release

  1. Daniel J. Neumann profile image59
    Daniel J. Neumannposted 7 years ago
    1. Ben Peck profile image57
      Ben Peckposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Hi Daniel,

      I think the page could be compacted a little, as the large gaps give a unfinished feel to the hub.

      Best of luck : )

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    Precious Williamsposted 7 years ago

    Hi Daniel
    I agree with Ben - the gaps followed by very intense script is very disorientating. And then the indents look strange.  Content is interesting and I would like to read the next chapter.

  3. Daniel J. Neumann profile image59
    Daniel J. Neumannposted 7 years ago

    How do you feel about the cover?

    http://hubpages.com/hub/The-Great-Release-Chapter-1

    Thanks for the great suggestions!

    1. Ben Peck profile image57
      Ben Peckposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Much better Daniel, well done

      1. Daniel J. Neumann profile image59
        Daniel J. Neumannposted 7 years agoin reply to this

        Thanks. And, as an update, Chapter 3 is up!

 
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