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my hubs is correct or not?

  1. kellydove profile image56
    kellydoveposted 7 years ago

    any one tell me

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    1. LaMamaLoli profile image61
      LaMamaLoliposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      which hub? It helps if you post a link to the hub you want us to look at.

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  2. IzzyM profile image88
    IzzyMposted 7 years ago

    English isn't your first language is it Kelly? Unfortunately it shows in your hubs. The English is all over the place making them really difficult read read.
    You've already recieved advice going by the comments in your statistics hub, to
    a) correct the spelling error in the title and
    b) move your comments box down.
    You can do this by going to 'My Account', opening the hub, then choosing 'Edit'.

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  3. SteveoMc profile image74
    SteveoMcposted 7 years ago

    I read two of your hubs, Defines of Satistics and Beauty tips for every Women.   

    You have a couple of problems that jump out at the reader:

    1.  The question you asked here:  my hubs is correct or not?  has a grammar error where plural subject does not match the verb.   It should be:  "hubs are."     That being said, the question is more like a fragment.

    2.  Both of the hubs I read have errors in the titles.   SATISTICS is not a word, at least it is not one I know.  Every and women is not right, it should be every woman, or all women, not every women.

    3.  That is just the beginning, these errors are spread throughout both hubs.   Improve this situation and the hubs improve quite a bit.

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