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two hubs: 1 on artificial trees and 1 on women's shaver---r they ok?

  1. schoolgirlforreal profile image86
    schoolgirlforrealposted 7 years ago

    I haven't done any product or commercial hubs before.
    Do you think these are any good?
    (am I allowed to put in a link?)
    thanks

  2. SteveoMc profile image75
    SteveoMcposted 7 years ago

    In extreme makeover, you may put a link:

    Here is the one for trees:

    http://hubpages.com/hub/Artificial-Tree … decorating

    1. schoolgirlforreal profile image86
      schoolgirlforrealposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      ty!
      here's the one for lady's shavers
      http://hubpages.com/hub/A-womans-intuit … haver-ever

  3. SteveoMc profile image75
    SteveoMcposted 7 years ago

    It is short.   More text would help.

    You need to move stuff around so that google ads are top right.

    If this is a sales hub, try to match the Amazon ads more closely to the text. 

    You might try less items per Amazon capsule so that you can control placement.   

    Your rss capsule could come down below.  More exposure to the ad capsules.

    1. schoolgirlforreal profile image86
      schoolgirlforrealposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      your right, it needs more text
      i fixed the google ads
      thankyou smile

  4. SteveoMc profile image75
    SteveoMcposted 7 years ago

    Again the shaver one has all the prime real estate ad space taken up.   Move the survey and photo below.

    Make that photo smaller.

    Move the Amazon ads around a little.

  5. saleheensblog profile image61
    saleheensblogposted 7 years ago

    one moire suggestion
    you can check some of the sales hubs of alison graham, rayankeet, spacy gracy, nellie rose, swan M who has a great experience in writing sales hubs. When you write a sales hub its important to make sure that the placements of ads looks appealing.

  6. schoolgirlforreal profile image86
    schoolgirlforrealposted 7 years ago

    thankyou all smile

 
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