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Critiques please!

  1. zatchj62 profile image58
    zatchj62posted 7 years ago

    Hello chaps.  I joined HugPages 8 months ago.  I started writing down a few thoughts on sports topics.  I had written 12 Hubs before I drifted off into my busy world and I recently published my first hub in almost 8 months.  I would like some constructive criticism on my two best and newest hubs.  Before I published these two I realized mine were very short without much depth.  I decided to change my style and I have gotten good comments about them since.  Profile:  http://hubpages.com/profile/zatchj62

    The two I would like all of you to read and get back to me on are "NFL Preview-Week 2"  and "Aaron Rodgers, Charles Woodson...and the Offseason".  You may read the others if you like but I'm not fond of those so I could care less about comments, no offense.

  2. zatchj62 profile image58
    zatchj62posted 7 years ago

    Almost completely off on this Hub but I enjoyed writing and reading it:

  3. Shadesbreath profile image85
    Shadesbreathposted 7 years ago

    I read your week two preview.  It seems fine to me.  The writing is fine, although I think you could get rid of the places where you seem to making excuses for why you are only picking four teams.  I think it weakens your credibility to apologize for that, where just giving your four picks would be one of those "it is what it is" without the explanations.  It's not a big deal, but if you are the football authority, do what you want.  Why make excuses?

    A few pics would be nice too, but I'm not sure that's possible with NFL copyright etc.

  4. zatchj62 profile image58
    zatchj62posted 7 years ago

    Done and done my friend.  Any more people wanna give some input?

  5. zatchj62 profile image58
    zatchj62posted 7 years ago

    Come on guys no input?

  6. saleheensblog profile image61
    saleheensblogposted 7 years ago

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