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I've found my new love!! Hubbing!!

  1. Zotan profile image60
    Zotanposted 7 years ago

    I never even dreamed of writing, and enjoying it... i think this is a great way to express things, and have your little say on things.. I really enjoy seeing what other people's little life stories are too, from all over the world!  amazing, this is definately my cup of tea. and all i'm asking of you guys is exactly what this forums for.... constructive critiscm.. any tips? am i going wrong any where? as i'd love to improve on my writing so to make you readers have a better read!! lol thank you smile

    1. John Holden profile image60
      John Holdenposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Hi Zotan and welcome, it's fun.
      As you ask for criticism, can I suggest a little more content, like about twice as much. Leave them wanting more is good, wanting lots more, not so good.
      Can I also suggest more care with spelling and like me some days can't remember how to spell your own name then either write first in a word processor or use google chrome which checks your spelling in most on line forms including Hub pages. Mind you, it will tell you you've mis-spelt google!

      Are you in Durham UK?

      1. Zotan profile image60
        Zotanposted 7 years agoin reply to this

        thank you very much John.. yes I am in Durham U.K.  and i find it hard to write more... I think I like short and sweet. But i will really try..

  2. ediggity profile image61
    ediggityposted 7 years ago

    Don't mess with the Zotan!

    1. Zotan profile image60
      Zotanposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      lol   thats how i got the name.. love adam sandeler's films too!

  3. chan0512 profile image76
    chan0512posted 7 years ago

    Not sure who Zotan is. Just keep writing, you will improve over time.

    1. ediggity profile image61
      ediggityposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Zotan is right above your original comment.  Don't mess with her.

    2. Zotan profile image60
      Zotanposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      thank you... If you're reffering to the adam sandler film, it's called 'don't mess with the Zohan' watch it... it's good lol

  4. saleheensblog profile image60
    saleheensblogposted 7 years ago

    Well,I read your hubs. Use proper capitalization in your hubs and title, write bigger contents and do some keyword research if you want to earn from here.

    Welcome to HP. Enjoy hubbing.

    1. Zotan profile image60
      Zotanposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      thank you. I am addicted to hubbing..lol

  5. WryLilt profile image86
    WryLiltposted 7 years ago

    Zotan, it's great that you're enjoying hubpages.

    However hubpages is NOT a blogging site, which is what your hubs resemble.

    They're also very close to being removed as substandard for personal content.

    It might be an idea to read up in the learning centre.

 
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