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I want critique on my hub - do I publish it first & then post here?

  1. profile image55
    scootteddyposted 6 years ago

    Hi everyone!
    I'd love some feedback/critique on my first Hub! I was told to publish it and then post it here, but I don't want to be "promoting my own Hub." Should I "unpublish" and then post here?
    Thanks everyone!

  2. Haunty profile image84
    Hauntyposted 6 years ago

    A hub needs to be published for others to be able to see it. And you can "promote" in the extreme hub makeover.

  3. andygrant profile image58
    andygrantposted 6 years ago

    Post first. Let other see it and then ask for suggestions.

  4. NateSean profile image74
    NateSeanposted 6 years ago

    First off, great first hub. I think you have the idea down, using photos as well as text. And you describe everything well.

    Some suggestions I would make though.

    There's a whole paragraph where you tell us what everything cost. I would actually break that down into a list, in order from your greatest to least expense. And made that list it's own module.

    In a hub that's geared towards travellers, that list will be a lot easier to read and to memorize than a whole chunk of text. And it will ensure that more people read your hub because your list will help them plan, the way a list of directions helps us decide when and where to stop for lunch, bathroom breaks, etc.