Reviews please

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    adeaugustusposted 6 years ago

    I am new here just published 2 hubs. Please i want fellow hubbers to help and tell me what they think of my writting. Where i need to improve.

  2. froch profile image87
    frochposted 6 years ago

    It is good idea to read Learning Center first:

    It is good idea to start here. By answering your question: This is the place where you can found quality factors of well-writed Hub.

    In the second hand, watch your feedbacks and comments. Feedbacks and Comments are good source of knowledge about your....PR ;-)

  3. psycheskinner profile image82
    psycheskinnerposted 6 years ago

    The first one has no hard returns to break up the text into paragraphs, the other one has far too many (and in the middle of sentences).