I have posted this story on here before but I have changed some things since then and am wondering if it's any better. Any critiques would be greatly appreciated. This is the first part of four short stories that are on my page. If anyone would be willing to read the whole series, I would greatly appreciate a critique of the story as a whole.
by Adele Cosgrove-Bray7 years ago
Having been here for fifteen months now, I've yet to receive my first cheque from Adsence or Amazon. Just this morning, thanks to advice in a Hub written by the Bard of Ely, I altered the layout of my Hubs so that...
by richsim8 years ago
I have written4 hubs and I would really appreciate any input, good or bad, about them.I have been having a tough time getting photos, enough of them in my hubs....got alot of text. Thank you very much. ...
by zatchj627 years ago
Hello chaps. I joined HugPages 8 months ago. I started writing down a few thoughts on sports topics. I had written 12 Hubs before I drifted off into my busy world and I recently published my first hub...
by lillm7 years ago
Hello!I just joined Hubpages a few days ago. I've produced a few hubs at this point, and I'd like to know if I'm on the right track. I can already say that my use of pictures needs some work - I'm still doing some...
by money-man7 years ago
Feedback about my hub, Compare checking accounts online is needed. Please do not post critiques in the comment section of the hub. I'd rather read the critiques here, in this forum.Thanks for your help!
by HauserQ6 years ago
I joined Hubpages a few weeks ago but haven't published a hub until now. If any of you wouldn't mind taking a quick glance at it and giving me any suggestions it would be greatly appreciated....
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