I Just published my first HubMob article, looking for critiques.

  1. Shayne Hall profile image58
    Shayne Hallposted 9 years ago

    I'm new to hubpages and I'm becoming addicted to article writing, but I want to deliver great material. I'm looking for feedback on all my hubs (a link to my latest is below), and any suggestions about how to get more circulation. Thanks in advance...Shayne Hal.

    http://hubpages.com/hub/HubMob-Weekly-T … vestments_

  2. Whitney05 profile image83
    Whitney05posted 9 years ago

    I would try breaking the content up so that you have multiple capsules. You can then right-align pictures, videos, polls, and affiliate capsules to help break up one long page of writing.

  3. packerpack profile image59
    packerpackposted 9 years ago

    First of all I would like to tell you that you have some excellent content in you hubs. Content quality is really very good. But there two things that I have noticed in most of your hubs. But before I tell you my advice I would tell you to follow Whitney05's advice too. In short she has said very important things. Now my advice;

    1. You do not use images in your hubs at all. It is a good way with which you can make the position of ads appearing on your Hubs to change. This will help you make your readers keep guessing about the positions of ads that will be shown and hence it will in turn help you get more clicks and in turn earn more.

    2. The use of tags. This is the most common problem that I have seen with some very good Hub and in your case too it is the same. Consider this hub "3 Weird and Mysterious Things About Money", you have given tags like "money, gold, weird, tangible". Consider the tag "Gold", any user searching with this keyword on any search engine will expect any information related to it like, "which is the biggest gold producing country, current value of gold in different country, how to use money to invest in gold etc etc". Definitely they will not be expecting anything like what you have in your hub. Read my comment on how to write tags here at this link http://hubpages.com/forum/post/123594

    I would advice you to also go through this comment of mine http://hubpages.com/forum/post/123610 . Here I have written about different ways to improve your hub. Do read.

    And yes at the end I would like to say that please don't be offended by my strong comments. It will just help you and nothing more.