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Constructive Criticism Welcomed!

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    Azyrusposted 6 years ago

    Hello everyone,

    Looking for some constructive criticism (that I could use to better the hub or future hubs), specifically for my latest. Please be kind wink

    http://azyrus.hubpages.com/hub/Fishing-for-Bream

    1. AEvans profile image64
      AEvansposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Interesting hub! Add a pic to your profile and get writing! I have became your first fan so get writing~ smile

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        Azyrusposted 6 years ago in reply to this

        Thanks very much, I will add a picture soon I keep procrastinating about it =\
        Really appreciate all your help, how do you send someone fan mail?

    2. kschang profile image88
      kschangposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      What you need is a good intro... like WHY should I fish for bream?

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        Azyrusposted 6 years ago in reply to this

        That is exactly what I need! Thank you.

 
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