a little rusty

  1. lbjnelson profile image52
    lbjnelsonposted 9 years ago

    I haven't written in a long time.  I love to write even started a novel. I think my third hub is pretty decent "families and addiction" it was up to a 70 now it's down to a 68?  Feedback much appreciated.

    1. Ryan Hupfer profile image69
      Ryan Hupferposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      Hey lbjnelson,

      Solid Hub with some great info. Probably the only thing that I would suggest is to bold the main steps as you list them out. Like this:

      1. Do be consistent. If you say "No" then the answer is "No". If you ground your child, for the love of GOD, don't unground them because Susie is having a huge party.

  2. Lissie profile image79
    Lissieposted 9 years ago

    Hubscores always bounce around a bit - don't worry about it.  I guess my initial reaction is that personal stories don't make the most interesting hubs: hubs really need to be about something that someone wants advice: maybe turn your addiciton story around into a hub about dealing with teens who want to start drinking? Or how to decide on a designated driver? just as an example.

    Also I think you are a bit short - I fin usually 800-1200 words works well here.  I would mix up some photos and vids too

    Hope this helps Lis