new hubber needs advice

  1. mcgreg28 profile image61
    mcgreg28posted 6 years ago

    I posted my first hub: Does Kim Kardashian's Career Ends with Psoriasis? I am asking the more experience Hubbers to critique and offer some advice/tips.

  2. Peter Owen profile image60
    Peter Owenposted 6 years ago

    Your english is ok though you should check some of the sentence structure, spelling, and layout.
    Main point is the hub seems unfinished. What should she do about the diagnosis, what usually happens to people with the same thing, what products are available to fight this stuff, etc.

    welcome to hubpages