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My First Sales Hub... Suggestions welcome.

  1. MelissaBarrett profile image61
    MelissaBarrettposted 6 years ago

    http://melissabarrett.hubpages.com/t/282f4f

    Okay, so I need advice. Be blunt, I can take it *flinches*

    1. Barbara Kay profile image85
      Barbara Kayposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      This looks great to me with plenty of good info.

      1. MelissaBarrett profile image61
        MelissaBarrettposted 6 years ago in reply to this

        Thank you.

  2. Mark Ewbie profile image83
    Mark Ewbieposted 6 years ago

    Hi Melissa, I'm rubbish at sales hubs so what can I say?

    It looked OK to me.  I have seen mentioned, and I agree, that comments have no place on a sales hub.  You're not looking for feedback such as "my what a wonderful sales hub, hope you sell something" - it's about Google search, adsense clicks and Amazon sales.

    If you scroll through your page, the last set of adverts are lost underneath the great big empty comment space.

    Poetry, creative for comments and touchy feely stuff - sales are just sales.

    That's my opinion.

  3. MelissaBarrett profile image61
    MelissaBarrettposted 6 years ago

    Good point.  LOL, I didn't know you COULD remove comments.  Comments box removed.  Thank you Mark.

    1. Mark Ewbie profile image83
      Mark Ewbieposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Thanks Melissa, and when I said "looks OK" I meant that in a positive way, not offhand.  Now I read it back it seems a bit lacking somehow.  Anyhow.  It's OK (and that is a good thing).

      1. MelissaBarrett profile image61
        MelissaBarrettposted 6 years ago in reply to this

        LMAO,OK is fine.  My Earnest Hemingway quality stuff will not be aimed at selling hair gel smile

  4. Peter Owen profile image60
    Peter Owenposted 6 years ago

    I think it's a great hub.
    But I don't understand your first sub title - Hippies want...

    1. MelissaBarrett profile image61
      MelissaBarrettposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Organic, back to nature stuff is called "hippy stuff" by a lot of the people I know.  It was sort of a joke.

      It might be regional though, do you think I should leave it out?

  5. Peter Owen profile image60
    Peter Owenposted 6 years ago

    your call - I may just not be up on that stuff so don't rely on me.

 
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