Can you help me improve my writing?

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  1. Nspeel profile image75
    Nspeelposted 6 years ago

    I have posted 22 hubs as of right this second. I also have another 5 hubs to publish slowly into the community. I was just interested in getting criticed. I have been out of school for awhile now and just figured out believe is spelled "believe" and not "beleave" i just need a crash course on what i'm doing wrong.
    My profile is http://nspeel.hubpages.com/ and my favorite article is http://nspeel.hubpages.com/hub/The-Unkn … -Treatment

    1. kschang profile image86
      kschangposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Read your "favorite" hub. Content seem to be good, organization needs a little work.

      Right now this hub reads like a blog entry: my puppy got sick, I tried something, he got better, I love this product.

      What you *should* be writing is: do you have a sick puppy? My puppy was sick and this product saved it. My puppy was sick. I went to vet, and found my choices are bad. I thought outside the box. This product I found worked. My puppy is fine now. I love this product.

      See the difference?

  2. relache profile image87
    relacheposted 6 years ago

    As far as spelling goes, that's what the built-in spell checker in the text capsules is all about.

  3. melbel profile image95
    melbelposted 6 years ago

    Use ONLY pictures you have taken yourself or pictures you have the legal rights to use. Here is a guide to using and finding photos:
    http://hubpages.com/learningcenter/legal-image-use

  4. Dame Scribe profile image60
    Dame Scribeposted 6 years ago

    HP is geared towards more of providing articles that are useful for others smile just answer the what, where, when, how and why of your topic. I usually set mine down in point form then write it in paragraph form tongue just a thought. Welcome to HP smile

 
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